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darkling
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since 2001-08-28
Posts 90
altered state of mind

0 posted 2002-12-29 09:03 PM



I'd like to state,
from the beginning,
that everything you've
ever been told is wrong.

It's nothing personal.
We've all heard the same things.
And so, it begins.

Cry over spilt milk.
If you cry hard enough,
someone else will clean it up.

Don't let sleeping dogs lay.
Take the risk and wake them.
You may end up with a few bites in
embarassing places, but you'll live through it.

And though everything that glitters
is not gold, it might be a shiny 1997 penny
which you could put toward your college education,
or more likely,
you might just pick the penny up and leave in your car.
Either way, I'm sure the penny will be happy.


© Copyright 2002 Annika - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2002-12-29 09:06 PM


Oh i like this...just enough cynicism and sarcasm to make me smile
GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2002-12-29 09:16 PM


haha... I like this alot

Now if only we could take on that pennys attitude and be happy in whatever place

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Salty
Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
3 posted 2002-12-29 10:33 PM


Making appropriate changes....for things I have learned.   

I have always had a hard time not picking up pennys....and I am a little more superstitous than I care to be. That comes from my Mother's side I believe.  WEll anyway back to your write and how enjoyed it..... Very Much....thats how~~~~

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2002-12-29 10:36 PM


Hi, I like the flavor here. I feel the same.
Sandra

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2002-12-29 10:37 PM


Good write

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2002-12-29 11:18 PM


I like your thoughts here......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2002-12-30 02:41 AM


like your style and train of thought
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