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Love Lost |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
Love brought me to this point in my life It carried me through pain and caused much along the way I miss feeling the love i believed to be true I believed it to be real because I loved it... unconditionally I was blinded my thoughts in a jumble crazy to the point of incoherency I'm still hurting and feeling lost and betrayed but i still cannot tell myself or make myself believe that it wasn't something...real because to me it was I loved so deeply that no matter what happened or what was said I still loved you and to this very day... I still do the pain has dulled..a little sometimes its worse than others but the memories have not faded 9/24/01 |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
I dont know what to say before reading this.... Just dont be sad keep breathing the life.. Very nice words.. Hugessss Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I felt much emotion in this poem. Just don't know if they were your own or not, so I won't comment any further. I've put my foot in my mouth before (so to speak}  "Love makes the world go around" |
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neveah5 Member
since 2002-11-22
Posts 197Ohio |
I wrote this last year during one of the most difficult times in my life so far. I was severely depressed and deeply in love with a man 12 years older than I. Its a long long story so I won't go any further on it. Thank you both for your kind words.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You write of your feelings very well. I enjoyed this and hope to see more from you. Welcome to Passions. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Heather, thanks for the explanation. I thought that I was reading some things "between the lines", but i didn't want to say too much. I do know, though, that writing about things does help. But you already know that don't you?  Oh, congratulations on your new baby... (I read it in one of the other threads...) "Love makes the world go around" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, just want to say I have been there, loving someone who isn't right. And yeah, it hurts a lot. You showed the feelings well here. Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't feel alone here...I've been there too |
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