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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-06-23 05:45 PM


Sometimes I think I am being punished
For some kind of sin I might have done
Even though I may have said I am sorry
This is the kind of punishment I have won
    
Getting someone like you to make me pay
For all of the things I did that was wrong
Chances are I will never really be loved
Love never seems to stay for very long

I have made it through all of theses years
Without having anyone there to love me
I am strong enough to take care of myself
Maybe that is the way it is suppose to be

When I met you, it was for the last time
To give this thing they called true love
Just one more time, I thought I would try
Nothing I ever do, seems to be enough

It is taking me longer than I thought
To get enough money to get my own place
When I finally do, you will be free of me
I will no longer be here for you to face

Remember when I told you I wish I'd die
Alot of times the things I said were true
But, you walked away as if you don't care
When I had opened up my heart to you

The pain I feel inside this heart of mine
I will never ever tell you about, again
I will keep it all deep inside of myself
And maybe, someday I will be forgiven

By Sue 6-23-02


© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-23 07:25 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I know He will forgive everyone, for even those with histories filled with sin like Mary Magdalene are always forgiven and I know much love and happiness and stillness is in promise and store for you! (BIG HUGGGGSSSSSS) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-06-23 07:28 PM


enjoyed
Magnus
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3 posted 2002-06-23 07:52 PM


Sue,  I know of nothing that you should be
forgiven for....Seems that someone else
should be asking for forgiveness...

Love yourself first,  then you can love others...For you won't settle for someone
that does not love you....

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-06-23 07:56 PM


SweetSuzieQ~

'It is taking me longer than I thought
To get enough money to get my own place
When I finally do, you will be free of me
I will no longer be here for you to face


SmartChick ... NOW you're living up to your name !

Remember .... Plan your work ... and work your plan~

Love, hugs and continuing encouragement~
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-23-2002 08:29 PM).]

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2002-06-23 11:30 PM


Magnus, he was nothing like he is now, or believe me, I would not be with him today.
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