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Open Poetry #21

Lined Up

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-12 03:55 PM

Lined Up

there
is
a
silver
line
some
lovers
go
way
past
skin
to
the
know
the
know
is
an
inch
past
sublime
reaching
further
than
dreams
the
point
I
climb

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2002-06-12 04:11 PM

"in the know" then helen??

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

2 posted 2002-06-12 04:18 PM

This is "inching past sublime." Great write!

Shenachie

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-12 10:23 PM

Awesome poem!!!!!!!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-06-13 12:49 PM

The "pinnacle."
Well done

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