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LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-12 07:27 PM

(i write this more for the emotion, its unrevised (you'll see THAT soon enough lol) and not written for the flow or rhythm but just to get some feelings out..)

lovesick in more ways than one
   missing
       you know as much
            as ever

lovesick, in the sense of
       homesick
missing the sight of you
   the touch of you
   the smell of you
missing everything about you and
       wanting your comfort

lovesick, in the sense of
        ill-sick
like wishing there was a
    medicine
   a doctor could prescribe
to get rid of the lonely
but at the same time
  hoping
         there is no cure

lovesick, in the sens of
         sick in the head
mentally ill- poisoned by
   the sweetest thing of all
       You
     and Your Love
Cant get you out of my mind
   never stop thinking
  -dreaming- of you
im trapped in this straightjacket
     only wanting free
   and free is you..
(im sure you can tell...lol, i'm missing the one i love--its been a rough day *smiles sadly*)

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-06-12 09:36 PM

Awww Tai, yes, I can see from your words
that you are missing someone...So very
obvious...And it is good to express that
emotion... It will pass...upon return of
your love...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-06-12 09:43 PM

Hang in there 'Tai... I'm sure that once your love reads these words, that will be enough to bring her back...

*hugs*
~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-06-12 09:43 PM

Sometimes words are best said when they just tumble out.....nicely tumbled here

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

4 posted 2002-06-12 10:27 PM

Thank you all for the kind words *hugs to everyone* ....yes, missing my boyfriend very much here. The situation, (looking from the outside) I'm sure, does not sound as bad as it feels...His mother (who is very strict about her religion) is saying that he shouldn't "date" me as it is against the religion, though we still are together it really limits the amount that we see eachother.

Ahh...I'm just dreamin' of the day we'll get married LoL *wistful smile*

I love him so much.  Hurts when he can't be here you know?

Thanks again for all of your comments, and for taking the time to read this.

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-06-13 03:16 AM

You got lots of feelings out...very nice...James

See me?
Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 93
UK

6 posted 2002-06-13 10:47 AM

Tai, this is beautiful it decribes your feelings so well, i know how you are feeling the pain of missing them is better than not thinking of them at all.
Hope you find your love
God Bless Clare

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-06-13 10:51 AM

LilTai
A good write and I enjoyed the read.

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

8 posted 2002-06-13 12:26 PM

I enjoyed this alot, just make sure he always knows how much you care. thx for sharing.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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