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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-11 10:28 PM


(I am writing this about this guy Greg that I dated for a short period of time who was just playin' me.)

Why did I love you?
Why do my tears fall like rain?
You caused me pain
On my life you are a strain
You are nothing but a stain

Why did I Love you?
You used me
abused me
lied to me
Why the hell did I love you?

Why did I love you?
You used girls before me
You mistreated them
and lied to them like you lied to me

Why did I love you?
Why would you use a life long friend?
That is just wrong
I said that was that
This game is through
Now I don't love you anymore.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
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1 posted 2002-06-11 10:42 PM


Like they say...."It's not nice to fool
Mother Nature" or a woman....

Nice strong write of feelings...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2002-06-11 10:44 PM


Dead on and to the point. Very pragmatic write. ThisDiamond
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-06-11 11:01 PM


sometimes we trust to easily and we love too easily...but hopefully we learn
*s
M

LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
4 posted 2002-06-11 11:24 PM


*hugs* Aw sweetie, we all get played at one time or another, and its one of the most painful feelings.  Once you find someone who treats you right and respects you though, you find every mistake you've ever made was worth it to be where you are now.  You learn from every experience, you know?

Great job expressing this into a poem, lots of emotion.  Nicely written =)

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
5 posted 2002-06-12 12:41 PM


Its sometimes the easiest asked questions that are hard to find answers to.
A lot of ache and yet strength in knowledge in these words.
Once we learn what we are looking for, we tend to learn more at what we are looking.
Why? Because that is what we do to learn, to grow, to survive.  

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-06-12 05:51 AM


Yes some just want to play...if we could figure out ahead of time who wanted to play and who was serious before we fell in love it would save us lots of pain...sometimes all the signs are there and we choose to ignore them...James
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