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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-06-10 10:37 PM



The city weeps for you. I can feel its sweat in all my pores. The rain pours in streams of itself. The airway tarmac is black oil. I remember the when of changing my watch. I watch the change across the sky. The city I left is weeping for you. The city I returned to doesn't know how to cry.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-10 10:38 PM


That was very beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-06-10 10:48 PM


beautiful...

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-06-12 12:14 PM


*bows*

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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