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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2002-06-11 10:48 PM

It seems as if was yesterday that she became my wife,
Forever and forevermore, she will be my life,
One and thirty years ago, we were joined as one,
One and thirty years ago, our journey was begun,
Four children born; two girls, two boys,
Times of sorrows, times of joys,
And all the while we stood together,
In brightest sun and darkest weather,
She is my friend, my confidante,
My every need, my every want,
My midnight lover, my heart's disclose,
She is my wife, my perfect rose.
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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-11 10:50 PM

That was so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-06-11 10:58 PM

And all the while we stood together

and that is as it should be...*s

M

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-06-11 11:24 PM

Tim,
when you write of love, it fills my heart.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2002-06-12 12:23 PM

nice acrostic hehehe yuh good to peep at yuh again yuh swell poet of a guy

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-06-12 12:26 PM

Tim

Beautiful and loving....so good to see!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-06-12 12:44 PM

It only took you 12 lines to sum up what a marriage should be, and is in your case. I am so happy for you and your wife, very few have what you do, and I wish you both a very Happy Anniversary.

There is nothing means more to me than
my faith, my family and my friends.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-06-12 03:33 AM

I'm so happy for you and want to tell you this is a beautiful write.
Love this upbeat feeling!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-06-12 07:04 AM

Next year, Tim, go ahead and repost The Oak...it is as worthy as A Perfect Rose.

bags123
Member

since 2002-06-06

Posts 128

9 posted 2002-06-12 07:49 AM

Beautiful sentiment. Your wife is a lucky women to have a husband as appreciative as you are. But then being male myself, I'm sure she has her moments of frustration. LOL

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-06-12 10:37 AM

enjoy

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