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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-04-26 06:38 AM



There is a sadness
inside of me, knowing that
someday never comes.

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-04-26 10:13 AM


Maureen darling girl you write so well, this is exceptionally well written. I love it I absolutely love it

Absolutely excellent writing you know I love every golden word. You are an incredible writer. Fabulous writing utterly utterly fabulous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-04-26 10:18 AM


Maureen,

Me too..but we must never say never and be convinced that lack is forever


Victoria
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3 posted 2002-04-26 10:18 AM


I know sweetie hugss...

              ~Victoria

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-04-26 10:22 AM


Maureen,
The wonders of sad. Very good.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2002-04-30 05:11 AM


hmmmm....I have to agree with you...it never comes, you have to go get it!
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2002-04-30 07:15 AM


thanks everyone..I just felt like writing something simple the other day and I always use the word someday...but as you know someday is always a day away..*s

M

Honeybee
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7 posted 2002-04-30 12:25 PM



I know this all too well.
An excellent senryu

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-04-30 03:38 PM


if you must be sad
then tomorrow never comes
someday WILL be here

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9 posted 2002-04-30 03:42 PM


Perfect lines.
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