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Seasoned Premier
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I adore the simple way that you hold the door open, draping your arm over my shoulders. Each time is like a seasoned premier. There is a certain style in the way you make me feel, all dressed up, cut into a time frame. It's those little things that you do and how you lead me over the crossings that I've crossed. Putting me in my place where I don't always like to be somehow making me feel that it matters and the show will go on. Ultimately, it is the way you stand beside me and how you make the red carpet roll beneath my feet. Saving my seat, front row and center staged turning down the lights..... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh! my kind of man  enjoyed lori.. hugs~Victoria
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ Awwwww a gentleman....such lovely thoughts....*sigh* I so admire this....  HUGSSSLauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-11-2002 10:52 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ultimately, it is the way you stand beside me and how you make the red carpet roll beneath my feet. Saving my seat, front row and center staged turning down the lights..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH WOW Lori!!! Oh this is wonderful.... Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Oh...I'm sorry let me get that for you. Anything else before I go...  I'm just here to serve. *S* Really, I do it pretty good actually. But not as good as you do your poetry. Nice job.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
simple pleasures are the best |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo! and an excellent choice in companions you have made it seems.... good stuff here Blues |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Sounds good to me. Lovely write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
...sensuous... since-u-was up would you grab me a beer and some chips babe...(he he) He sounds like a great find..and sounds like he found a great find too dug it babe |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) WOW, encore, encore, this is a wonderful premier of loves joy, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your wonderful words always make me smile, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
where can I get tickets?? wonderfully done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Lori, I love your metaphors, very cool. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori~ this was so beautiful and left me with a gentle smile...wonderful write! take care girlie... amy "you can't stop |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Victoria, when it's good it's very very good! Lauren~ A good man is hard to find, but when you find him it's worth all the frogs that've hopped on by! Thanks Lauren~ Nancy~ Wow is right!! Thanks for that. Larry~ You do what pretty good? Service with a smile?? You certainly do. What a guy!! passing shadows~ My point exactly. It's nice to see you here and thank you. Cpat my friend~ Things aren't always as they seem, I'm learning that lesson the hard way. Thanks Mr. Tabin~ I'm so glad you enjoyed the look of lovely, it's my all time favorite outfit. Dark Stranger~ I'm a sucker for chips and dip, and beer if you're buying. But who said I was up anyway? Thanks for digging in!! Noah~ Love is a hot topic and so much fun to write about, even when it swings both ways. Thanks Noah~ Hi Sven~ Thank you for enjoying the show. Gosh, it's really nice to hear from you. Dee~ I am stuck on the dang metaphors what can I say? I am always so happy to see your name here Dee. Amy~ I can almost picture your smile, as I often sit here reading all the great poetry and there is not a one that has ever failed to get a reaction out of me. Mind you I have been brought to tears a time or two. I think that is the glory of poetry, when we can feel the emotion behind the words reaching out to touch. Hugs backatcha~~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (04-12-2002 09:39 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, don't let go of that!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Ultimately, it is the way you stand beside me and how you make the red carpet roll beneath my feet. Saving my seat, front row and center staged turning down the lights..... Wow, he must be quite something, Lori... I hope this is real and if it isn't then I hope that it becomes real......real soon!  ~loving hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Duncan~ No I've no plans on letting go, I'm just careful not to hold on too tight. It's a fine line there you know! Thanks Lyra~ You're such a dear, it's as real as I want to believe it is....Thank you~ *hugs* |
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