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Open Poetry #20

those three little words

newmanwalking69
Junior Member

since 2002-04-10

Posts 10

0 posted 2002-04-11 03:41 PM

i love you, love is a word people used in such a harsh way, love is an emotion and not just a word, saying i love you has meaning to people and not just to get in people pants, love is a word people use for grant it and not because you love them, i love you should be three words that are the end of all words for people to hear. so many hearts broken when used the wrong way. i want to see people when they say i love you mean that I LOVE YOU have people actually mean it and not fake it, please use those three special words right and in your life will be happier then ever. once again those three little words are "I LOVE YOU"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-11 05:44 PM

(sigh) It too hurts me to see the name of love tarnished by many, but I know deep down much pure love remains in the world and I know with all my heart you will find your one true love and your love will bring you true happiness forever and ever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-04-13 09:08 AM

Some excellent thought here. I know this is 'prose poetry' so it's a bit harder to find a rhythm than the formatted lines. Well done.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-04-13 09:32 AM

Lovely thoughts...

WELCOME to Passions

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-13-2002 09:32 AM).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-04-13 01:38 PM

hey there!
Well, you're right, "I love you" is a special phrase and should only be used when you really mean it. I am guily of saying it once but I felt I was in love but really I was just confused.

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