navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Lip Gloss
Open Poetry #18
Post A Reply Post New Topic Lip Gloss Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-01-05 12:08 PM


Lip Gloss

As she pressed her lips against mine
empty parts of my life passed before my eyes
and pieces of my heart gained new
desires to sing out in happiness.
For in that very moment I realized
that I was just where I wanted to be
with exactly the woman I wanted in my arms
and nothing was going to come in between her lips
and mine except her sexy lip gloss
and some of the most beautiful words
I could ever care to hear.
"Honey I love you.  Do you love me?"

JamesLee
Jan01
2002

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-01-05 12:14 PM


*sigh* how very perfect.......you are right where you want to be hearing the words that make your life light up the stars. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
2 posted 2002-01-05 12:19 PM


JameMichael,
I really like this. But what's the need for the question? lol

Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-01-05 01:17 AM


You are a very busy man James haa...

                 ~Victoria

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
4 posted 2002-01-05 01:21 AM


Very nice, James! I like the way you used that lip gloss imagery. Let's hope it doesn't get in the way of romance.
Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2002-01-05 01:40 AM


James I love this one, I could feel you enjoying the kiss

fabulous writing as always, absolutely fabulous


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
6 posted 2002-01-05 10:40 AM


I love it.
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
7 posted 2002-01-05 11:44 AM




(sigh) Soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we're all so happy for the happiness you have found! (smiles) May the love of yourb dreams forever say "Yes", and may that rapture of her answer forever echo in your ears! (big hugggsssss) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2002-01-05 11:52 AM


James,
Well you have to get past the lip gloss to see. LOL Enjoyed

GhostWriter_6
Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237
??Amityville??
9 posted 2002-01-05 01:53 PM


lip gloss.. in 2 ways it is a beautiful...


1) a very sexual piece of a ladies make up bag

2) a great subject to write on if done with the correct lyrical format...

well done

strbbux
Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-01-05 02:09 PM


You are both soooooo lucky james. love this poem. floria
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #18 » Lip Gloss

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary