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amigo
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0 posted 2002-01-03 01:39 PM



Her soft fluttering look
  Searching for passion...
    Locks my eyes,
      Stops my breath,
        Touches my heart
          Echoing our love song....

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Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-03 01:46 PM


WOW!!!She sure has captured your eye and the passion flows in so few words but they are very sensual, indeed. Very well said. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amigo
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2 posted 2002-01-03 03:06 PM


Startime - Thank you...so glad that you enjoyed it...
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3 posted 2002-01-03 08:41 PM




(sigh) Ooohhhhhhh...you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful declaration of true love from your loving heart! (smiles) May you fall in love every time looking through your loves eyes! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-01-03 08:46 PM


Oh Yes!!!  Love this...I sure do!  ~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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5 posted 2002-01-03 11:34 PM


you described the process well...soft fluttering look..somehow, i am reminded of a rabbit..LOL..
amigo
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6 posted 2002-01-05 12:09 PM


Noah - Thank you for your sweet kind words....

Nancy - Thank you my friend....I like your words...

faterider - Thank you dear...

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2002-01-05 02:00 PM


amigo, this is soft and beautiful!

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

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8 posted 2002-01-05 02:04 PM


Lovely amigo, much said in a few words. floria
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