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Exit Wound................Finally something new!!!
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Exit Wound................Finally something new!!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Bare with me on this one, it's the first new poem I have been able to write in about 9 months or so. So she ain't much, but here it goes... Exit Wound Silk, satin pillow snow white Hands that cross indicate end of fight Laying hat within new home Leaving behind seeds they've sown In sorrow we gather For lack of words we blather For alas this is goodbye Go ahead, it's ok to cry Cry tears of laughter For they will laugh hereafter At peace within the light After all, they've earned the right For earth is not our home Just the learning place we roam For lessons we had to learn Called on to home once we earn The soul is a powerful tool So don't play it for a fool For it goes on to the beyond And from there it can still respond So talk aloud to love ones lost No phone bill, there ain't no cost They live on and truly not entombed It is only us that suffer the exit wound Marina Nov. 15 2001  It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 11-15-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your feelings fill the page. Write on  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Interesting piece. well done. Its good to see you writing again. J |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
great to read you again, Marina, sometimes we need a break! Kathleen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Keep writing Marina...James |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
My dear, this is absolutely splendid...I don't care if it took nine months, sometimes we have to experience a painful birth to behold joy.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This was well worth the wait Marina, it is so good to see that your muse has returned. Warm smiles* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's nice to meet you Marina. This is very good, both the theme and the writing. Food for thought, and I'm always hungry for more. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The soul is a powerful tool So don't play it for a fool For it goes on to the beyond And from there it can still respond So talk aloud to love ones lost No phone bill, there ain't no cost They live on and truly not entombed It is only us that suffer the exit wound ======================================= Ill bare with ya  (OH no..that's gemini s.) hehe  SHHHHhey girlie...it is indeed great to see your muse is waking up ....dont sell this piece short either... your played out the theme and metaphor perfectly and that last line wrapped it all up with the poetic impact. So kudos to you and your muse POETESS Marina You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ So good to see you with pen in hand~ I know these have been difficult times for you~ *Big HUGS* 'For earth is not our home Just the learning place we roam' Exquisite thought~  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful penned! ((hugs)) Charisma ~*TMP*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A cheery 'hello', and very well done! Hope to see more from you.... ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you everyone!!! Writing is a struggle for me these days, but I got lucky with this one. Actaully, you might say I had an "inspiration" from a mystery guest. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that you did. . . you've always listened to them. . . great job here. . . flows nicely, and it's a great theme. . . good to see you writing again. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Cry tears of laughter For they will laugh hereafter At peace within the light After all, they've earned the right' Excellent write, Marina...and I definitely hear ya on the FINALLY part...great work! sp   And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven and Snowpants, thank you. It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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