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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-13 12:09 PM

The Source of a Heartbeat

The enticement of a
heartbeat comes from
the squeeze of a finger
in a baby’s grasp

The wagging of a
dogs tail at the end
of the day

the laughter of child
and the purring of a kitten

The soaring of an eagle
over an open field beckons my
heart in warm tender, no less than
waves breaking at low tide

Morning walks, fragrant
with fresh cut grass
A steamy mug of coffee
warming cold hands

The enticement of a heartbeat
is found in a crackling fire
lending light to a soft kiss

achildsheart
11-13-01

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-13 01:23 PM

Annie, I absolutely love this one. Yes, all those things make my heart skip around.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-11-13 01:48 PM

AWhispersCaress~

'Morning walks, fragrant
with fresh cut grass
A steamy mug of coffee
warming cold hands'

So very lovely are your thoughts~
I am inspired by the words from your heart~

LOVE the poetry on your web site~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

*I loved it gooder-enough to copy my reply here~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-11-13 01:52 PM

Annie, I loved this, a true inspire. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-11-13 02:25 PM

Annie girl, you've got a fine source here...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-13 07:09 PM

Oh yes, it sure does. Absolutely wonderful reading. I smiled all the way through it. Thank you.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-13 07:15 PM

Gosh, now I think I have captured a name.
Ann?....IF I can only remember it....I am
so horrible with names...

Your visual imagry of this was magnificent
and it was so peaceful reading it...I loved
all the little parts...and the ending was
superb. Thank you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-11-14 04:39 PM

Absolutely...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-11-14 07:53 PM

indeed. . .

sofly spoken, and tenderly shared. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-12-12 02:06 AM

A Whisper's Caress-
   Such lovely and heart-warming thoughts
   you've penned here.
   Beautifully done.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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