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vandana
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0 posted 2001-11-14 11:32 AM



Life can be hard,
Sometimes,
Sometimes,
Life can be easy,
Life Is beautiful,
If you looked
Into yourself,
say the words you
wanted to,
Whenever ,
where your heart says,
All the way,
Where life Is?
Life can be
full of love,
and giving love away,
living It away,
In It's own light,
Life can be hard
to control somethings,
Sometimes,
If you see through your heart,
that life can be
In so many ways,
Life can be
In so many dreams and days
to shine upon love
you have,
Life can be full of magic,
and hope you have
Or you see,
Life can be,

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-14-2001).]

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-11-14 11:33 AM


Yuh its your choice and your party so you can cry if you want to cry if you want to o yuh nice poem

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-14-2001).]

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-14 11:34 AM


Life can be full of magic,
and hope you have
Or you see,
Life can be,

Oh yes it sure can. This is a pure joy to read. Wonderful and ends with such hope. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-11-14 11:39 AM


Vandana~Lovely uplifting write.  Enjoyed.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-11-14 01:02 PM




(smiles) BRAVO!!! Oh Vandana, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) With our loving hearts, we can make life full of love and happiness, and in believing in ourselves we can make life be. (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-11-14 02:55 PM


VanDana~
Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Magnus
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6 posted 2001-11-14 08:59 PM


Yes it certainly can....Life can be so many
things...Nice reflective and hopeful poem.

vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-12-12 02:15 AM



vandana-
   So very beautiful, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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