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JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-10-02 11:14 PM

The universe is hard to grasp
time and space are not like this sentence
there is no beginning, there is no end
just boundaries that do not exist
I know it may be hard to understand
the concept of things without end
But even more incomprehensible
is the limitless quality of love
The sum is greater than the parts
this is true of the universe
but love is different in one crucial point
It does have it's beginning with realization
that another can mean so much to you
But it is the same as space and time
in that it is unfettered by limits
and once truly felt, love will never fade
like a pinwheeling galaxy that has
seemed to have lost it's spark
No, it just expands with the universe
and outlasts time to exist beyond
any limits our faltering minds
may try to impose

A real man

kisses his children goodnight

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

1 posted 2001-10-02 11:51 PM

true.
very true.
also very good.
i like, do it again

-Napalm

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-03 12:42 PM

Wow. Last night I wrote a very short poem about the expanding universe and expanding love:

What if?
love became a spandex bandage?
Could we expand our love,
as the universe expands,
far enough to stop blood-letting hate?

I really like the thoughts you presented.
Thank you very much for sharing them.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-10-04 03:59 AM

Sometimes I wonder at boundaries myself. I like what you have said here in this poem.

enjoyed.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

4 posted 2001-10-04 10:36 PM

I've been watching your writing, and I enjoyed this very much!

I am many.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-10-05 12:04 PM

Nice one, James... and nice to see you..

Twilight Myst
Member

since 2001-10-04

Posts 58
Just A Myst At Twilight

6 posted 2001-10-05 12:26 PM

James, this is really very well done!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-10-05 06:30 AM

Nice expression...James

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