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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-09-24 11:14 AM




Horizon’s View

insight’s calm astounds
one rises above to see
a hand always there




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1 posted 2001-09-24 11:18 AM


yes...all depends on whether we look up or down...

nicely done.

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2 posted 2001-09-24 11:19 AM


Wow.  Great.  I love this.  Nice to wake up to...and carry with me today.
Logan
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3 posted 2001-09-24 11:21 AM


Ahhh, Lady, as usual, your few words speak volumes when let slide through the soul..very nicely done...very gentle smile
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4 posted 2001-09-24 12:20 PM


This is a keeper.  Made my heart smile.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-09-24 12:23 PM


Sunshine,
A litle bit of sunshine. *L*

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6 posted 2001-09-24 02:11 PM


Things .... when seen thru your eyes....
offer clarity and content...
Lady has spoken across the horizon of 16  

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-09-28 01:29 PM


oh sweet acumen
led by the Spirit within
always looking up

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8 posted 2001-09-28 03:48 PM


Beautiful Lady In White, simply beautiful!

~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly

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of Depression
9 posted 2001-09-28 07:16 PM



Horizontal hands
Smoothing sheets like a calm sea,
Warm familiar land


Gloom

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10 posted 2001-09-28 08:45 PM


Nice thought..
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-09-29 04:42 AM


LadyInWhite~
That's just real purty ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2001-10-05 11:25 AM


Stunning!!!!!

loved it


Charisma

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13 posted 2001-10-05 11:31 AM


Very nice one! A nice addition to a new day. ~Marie~
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14 posted 2001-10-05 12:37 PM


oh, dear me - a spendid haiku - You probably don't know me very well, because if you did you'd know how haikus kick-start my kitty kicking ways.  If that lil Sunshine comes around now, she'll rebuke me for these thoughts of kitties!  Please don't tell her I was here - she'll lay in wait for future poems of mine and... dear me...
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15 posted 2001-10-05 12:39 PM


Sunshine? kitty kicking is bad, this poem is good!
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