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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-07-24 09:32 PM

3:13 AM. listening to some rap music,
just to stay awake.
backstreet Boys playing in the back,
just enough to break,
the tiredness.

3:16 AM. Danish time nothing to do,
don't wanna sleep.
but I wanna close my eyes so that,
I can dream sweet dreams.
bout happiness.

3:20 AM. still writting unbelievable,
my eyes haven't closed.
Drinking some coffee just to stay up,
I'm rosting some toast.
to awakeness.

3:24 AM. thinking bout the concert,
with the beach boys.
In Tivoli, Good vibrations, Surfin' USA,
together with Mike Lowe.
in tenderness.

3:28 AM. I just wanna say to you,
all a goodnight.
may you have some plessent dreams,
and sleep tight.
til Christmas.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-24 09:40 PM

Hey this is a new one to me, never seen time pass at anactual state of time so to speak. Writing the minutes as they happen... hmmm quite interesting. /Nick/

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-25 12:02 PM

sleep till Christmas! whoa.....I CAN'T miss Fall

I liked this

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-26 02:11 AM

I thought this was highly creative. Well done on that!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

4 posted 2001-07-26 11:36 AM

Good write../Drew/

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

5 posted 2001-07-26 01:48 PM

Agree with Dopey=creative.
Which i really really like. This was well done, keep it up!

~Jeff~

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-30 11:58 PM

I liked this... I think it's very creative. I didn't quite understand the meaning, sleeping until Christmas? But nicely done, nonetheless. I enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

7 posted 2001-07-31 02:24 PM

Liked this...i cant miss fall either

FOOTBALL!

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