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Teen Poetry #5

Wrestling With Life

Zengo
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 31
Rogersville, AL

0 posted 2001-07-23 11:39 PM

My love and passion,
I can control,
For it's a fantasy world,
The outcome I already know,
Because the script tells me so,
But you on the other hand,
There is no script for me to see,
I can only hope,
That God will see,
And write you into my script,
The script of life,
And with this,
He will place you next to me.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-24 12:26 PM

I see what you're saying here. I liked it, Nic. Thanks for the read. Hope to see you posting/replying more.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-07-25 12:05 PM

very good imagery here....I really liked this

good job

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-07-26 02:10 AM

This reminds me of a poem called "O me, O life" where in the end the author goes on to say how life is a play.
I wish you luck that the person is written on your script

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-30 10:59 PM

Nice work... I like the analogy with the script. Very interesting read... thanks for sharing with us. Nicely done! I hope to see more posts and replies soon

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-07-31 10:22 PM

hope it comes true...very nicely written piece.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take

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