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Ski*Chick
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Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-07-26 12:24 PM


If I could show you the world now I would
I’d bring you everywhere
But I can’t your in heaven

I have learned leadership skills
I have learned life’s not always going to treat me right
I have learned so much

Words couldn’t explain how much I love you
You are alive in my heart
I guess GOD wanted to see how I’d make it without you

I am doing fine with friend’s family
Someday’s are like climbing to the top of a hill and at the end I make it
Someday’s are easy like going down the hill

This winter I’m going skiing
So I can scream and let you know I’m skiing again
You’d love to hear it

On days that are so nice out I see your face smiling down on me
And I just look up and smile back
All I want to say is I love you dad

You have left a piece of you inside of me
And where ever I go
I’ll always remember you as a very special dad

Love Min  

RIP Mikko Talviharju
February 21,1942 to December 23, 1999

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
Spice
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1 posted 2001-07-26 01:03 AM


Minna- This was a very nice dedication to your father. I'm sure he'll be watching down on you smiling while you ski. He must have been a really great person.   Thanks for the read.
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2 posted 2001-07-26 03:19 AM


nicely done......I've said it always and i'll continue to say it....yer dad is def. very proud of you. Keep that head up.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Punk Angel
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since 2001-07-25
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3 posted 2001-07-26 08:30 AM


this was a very nice read, im sure ur dad is incrediably proud of u. at the begining of the poem i thought u were talking about a crush but now i c that its much deeper than that.

Punk Angel

Ski*Chick
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4 posted 2001-07-26 12:05 PM


Thank you for always replying to my poem this poem was gona be untitled but I never got the chance to write the rest of it thats why its U
~*~Min~*~  

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

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5 posted 2001-07-26 06:43 PM


this was a VERY nice tribute poem for your Dad...i liked the poem...and im sure he is proud oof you...bye Minna

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-26-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-07-31 12:32 PM


This is beautiful.. finished or not.  A VERY touching tribute to your father.  You amaze me, Minna.  Your optimistic attitude and outlook on life is really admirable... All your poems touch me in such a way because you're such a strong person.  Beautiful work, here.  Simply awesome.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Jessica
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7 posted 2001-07-31 12:36 PM


This was very good. I am sure he would be proud of you... awesome tribute.  
Kevin
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8 posted 2001-07-31 02:13 PM


Great words here..he is no doubt proud of you
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