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Pointing Fingers
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Pointing Fingers |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
People all around pointing at me I just keep asking them "What do you want me to be?" They all know my life is tough But no matter what I do it's never enough I've tried running away from them without making a sound But no matter where I go they're always around All I want is for them to go away They never truely want to hear what I have to say When I feel like dieing they just sit there and stare I wonder to myself "how don't they care?" The people I speak of you will never see Because the people I speak of are really me! By, Lauren |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow!!! What a twist!! Great read! Into my library! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
i have to agree this was a very twisted poem but i liked it. Very good  It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Great poem lauren! I ask myself too "how dont people care"...and i can never seem to find the answer to it so i just pretend that they do and are just not good at showing it...nice job..im sorry things are so rough ::hugs:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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