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allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

0 posted 2001-11-10 02:33 AM

*Stupid post, though i thought it was kind of fun... anyway tell me what you think*

Poets always write about,
Love lost,
Love found,
Love worn.
I’m not a poet,
Love has not lost me,
I have not lost love.
Love never found me,
Though I found love.
I’ve never worn love,
Love has worn me.
As night falls girl always ask,
Do you love me?
Do you care for me?
I am a girl,
I do not claim to own your heart,
Though you claimed mine.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-11-10 04:59 AM

.......

Love is a truly great feeling...like nuclear physics...it can be benifetal...or VERY dangerous. It can bring pain...beyond normal conception---I'd rather be tortured than to experience heartbreak as I am now. Hold on to what you have...

"There's one pain that not even a soldier can overcome...it's called love..."

"To be forgotten is much worse than death!"

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2001-11-10 09:07 PM

I must agree, love is the most wonderful feeling. In my experience the pain was worth the love I found waiting for me, now I hope I am good/strong enough to hold onto it. I liked this poem. And yes, hold on to what you've got.

*Rich*

Don't Drink and Park!
Accidents may cause People!

~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2001-11-11 03:37 PM

wow i really like this poem!!!! it sortta confuses me, but i also get the point, just a weird feeling, but i like it!

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2001-11-11 03:57 PM

I agree with all who are above me! Thanks for sharing!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-11-11 07:46 PM

Your poem is so true I really like this one.Keep up the great work.
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-11-13 01:40 PM

I liked this one

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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