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a.k.a.maLa
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 15
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-09-15 01:00 AM

Trapped in my own dissonance
Caged in virulance and fading slowly
I can hardly speak and all I can do is wait
Maybe one day you can rescue me again
Maybe one day you can love me again
When I lose sleep just do daydream about you
Tears come to my eyes and drop off my porcelain doll face
I can't seem to breathe without you
I can't seem to smile
I forget what it's like to feel real
And all I feel is longing
Desire to partake in everlasting sleep
I can't seem to shake the feelings
Everytime we speak and it is all there
So far within my reach
Words unattainable
Words unspoken
Let go of yourself
Allow me to pull you under
I will always adore you
I will always love you
Think of me-not in judgement
Be true because somehow
I know you
Love me somehow

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2001-09-15 06:01 AM

awwwwwww this is so sad! well i hope everything works out for the best.
robin

Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-09-15 02:54 PM

Very sad poem I hope everything gets better for you.Keep up the awsome work,
Lauren

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

3 posted 2001-09-15 03:32 PM

Very lovely poem...got me all sad tho...but I liked tons

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-09-16 03:59 AM

"Maybe one day you can rescue me again
Maybe one day you can love me again"
Loved the last 5-6 lines as well...
Kudos to you on this write, it was awesome!

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-09-17 03:19 AM

"I can't seem to breathe without you
I can't seem to smile
I forget what it's like to feel real
And all I feel is longing
Desire to partake in everlasting sleep
I can't seem to shake the feelings"

*sigh* I know this all too well. Nice write. Keep them coming and never ever stop writing because I love reading your work.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

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