navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Filled
Open Poetry #14
Post A Reply Post New Topic Filled Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-28 07:14 PM



Filled


Tasting
Each slender phrase.
No longer hungering,
I am feeding upon your words
Set before me. Every detail
Softened, to be swallowed,
And satisfy...
Line filled.

~Wynter




"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 05-28-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-05-28 07:28 PM


Oh wow, is this beautiful written.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

theLadypoet
Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97
Or USA
2 posted 2001-05-28 07:50 PM


What a lovely young woman you are...pretty
as a picture.
Wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

theLadypoet

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-05-28 08:12 PM


Oh yes, have I ever been there! You summed this up perfectly.
Sandra

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Filled

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary