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Red-uni
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0 posted 2001-04-08 01:10 AM


Joyously I think of you, the one who leads my way.
I could not trust, but you bid me to stay.
I stayed and learned in you I could trust,
as your feelings are far deeper than lust.
You give me gifts, and take my hand,
because of you I take a stand.
I’ll be with you forever more,
as your love inside me I store.
I have learned to love you much,
and gasp in pleasure at your touch.
Your hands so gentle and strong,
when touching me are where they belong.
Our children now are grown,
to them our love was shown.
Our grandkids now light our life,
and I am so happy to be your wife.
We’ll watch them grow, our love to show,
as on their faces we see the happy glow.
In our old age we will sit and rock,
as our love in our hearts we lock.
And whoever does die first,
will make the other’s heart want to burst.
Until realizing that the one who dies,
is still within, then with relief the one left sighs.
The love now is in the form of nature,
and many moods it will capture.
The gentle breeze that kisses the lips,
as gently within the contentment slips.
The ocean waves, forming beautiful white caps,
will fill the soul as the one left naps.
The candle that is burning bright,
will help the one to see the light.
Then when the one left does die,
together then we both shall lie.




© Copyright 2001 Kathy Bonet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-08 01:56 AM


Ohh! RED! This is so tender.   Let us hope that for the subjects of this poem the time to die comes slowly, and that they get as much time together here on this earth as they can.  I don't think I've ever seen rhyme from you. I like it.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Red-uni
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2 posted 2001-04-08 11:08 AM


Thanks Jenn,
I don't usually do rhyme, so I was not sure how it would turn out.
Red

Corinne
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3 posted 2001-04-08 01:59 PM


Lovely tribute, Red!

Corinne

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4 posted 2001-04-08 09:49 PM


This deserves more attention.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-04-08 10:02 PM


This was an awesome write, Red.  A portrait of what a marriage should be.  You are very lucky to have found him.  May you have many happy years together.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-04-08 10:32 PM


RedUni~
This is really lovely.
~*Marge*~

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Red-uni
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7 posted 2001-04-08 11:42 PM


Thanks for your comments.    It is late an I am falling asleep too tired to write to a comment back to each of you.    (Just had to say thanks.)
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