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Dark Poetry #3

empty peace

JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

0 posted 2001-03-05 04:44 PM

Empty Peace

Why?
It is not I,
In the mirror.
Who’s eyes?

Pain.
Layered so deep.
Sad reflection.
How long?

Gone.
Memories fade,
Of dreams, of love.
What price?

Paid.
Flayed from my soul.
Nothing remains.
Time now,

To Sleep.

John D LeClare

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

1 posted 2001-03-05 06:34 PM

John,
simple, sad and beautful
excellent write*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

2 posted 2001-03-05 08:04 PM

Thank you

Kerri S
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 61
Rhode Island

3 posted 2001-03-06 03:01 PM

Such a sad poem although I do think we have all felt this way at one time or another.

Kerri

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

4 posted 2001-03-06 03:32 PM

Read this one under the title Time. Like the Empty Peace title better

Still enjoyed the read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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