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Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2001-03-04 12:34 PM


Sorry guys I haven't been around much, did you all miss me? i have ben having issues, i can't even seem to write or find the time to. but anyway i had a few moments and i felt like getting some stuff out so i hope you enjoy it, let me know.

I don't want to make you chose,
But what else can I do?
They are the people who make me this way,
But they are still the ppl you care for,
Thye say things and you won't believe me,
Don't you see you are letting them win?
What can I do?
I have always been here for you,
Now I need someone for me,
But it seems like you are just running away,
YOu aren't on my side anymore,
I know you love me,
But what am I to think?
Maybe you don't anymore,
I can't understand why you are doing this,
why aren't you protecting me?
Just this once i need to hide behind you,
But you won't let me,
Why are you letting them win?


"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

© Copyright 2001 Gin Leigh - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-03-04 02:27 AM


Good write Ginners,
full of confusion and angst.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
2 posted 2001-03-04 01:47 PM


Ginners,
It's Nice to see you back
I was getting a bit worried
I know how it feels to give all that you have for someone else
and when you finally need someone they aren't there
It's tough
Hoping things are getting better for you....
Temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-03-04 08:38 PM


Welcome Back!
Yes it is so sad when they give in to peer pressure, and are sheeplike and can't think for themselves. All you can do is cut your losses and pray they find themselves someday...
Well done
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2001-03-06 04:29 PM


Friends build us up and encourage us...all others are not really friends...we just think they are or wish they were...James
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