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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2001-03-04 08:01 PM


They've both been burnt it's true,
They've both been let down,
But why is it now a game of odds and evens,
Why continue with the frowns?

They are working to overcome hurt,
On both sides it's true,
So why continue to hurt her,
Why slash her emotionally through?

She has nightmares at night,
Feels so many losses,
Losses of love, trust and family,
It's enough to make her toss.

One day without grief or pain,
Is NOT too much too ask,
It doesn't take much effort,
Is not an insurmountable task.

She has more enemies than you,
Her soul, lonliness, fear, dejection,
No one to reach out to,
Just wallowing in rejection.

She is a light,
That's TRYING to still shine,
But if he keeps up with the emotional abuse,
The light may go out for all time.

She feels her good will never be enough,
She's alone and nowhere much of the time,
She has put herself last for an eternity,
Amd to top it all off she is past her prime.

Nourish her, nuture her,
Do the manly thing,
And then you can both have what you want,
A life of love together to sing.



*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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Sven
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1 posted 2001-03-05 12:51 PM


perhaps. . . if she put herself first. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
2 posted 2001-03-05 06:39 PM


Isis,
This hit home
Once again, a familar scene told through your words....lovely piece
Temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2001-03-05 07:07 PM


She does spiritually and emotionally most of the time Sven
Thanks also TM

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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