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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
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0 posted 2001-02-03 10:35 PM





I am desperately infatuated
"In love",     I claim?
My breath is all but gone
You have taken me captive
in your SEDUCTIVE  web

Nothing   left   for me to do
but let you suck the life out of me
I see your plan is different than mine
at least,    I think so??

Where from here?
I feel only doom
Only a dark forboding gloom
So I sit in fear
With a burning tear
crying for  *YOU*

Chase away my  stormy blue
That is what I live for now
To "love"   only  YOU
And  YOU  love only  ME
But that will NEVER  be
A   TRUE   REALITY!

Please do what you will do
But,   do "IT" quickly
For God's sake
Do "IT",  before I self destruct
Leave my dignity behind
And beg out of my mind!

In a  state of
Going nuts!



[This message has been edited by Scarlet Lady (edited 02-04-2001).]

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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
1 posted 2001-02-04 12:09 PM


I know this one...only a time or two...and then you give in or give up...
Good poem! Made me remember what IT feels like.
     Thanx!!

Click



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2 posted 2001-02-04 12:34 PM


Very well written. I felt the craziness within the poem. Sorry you're going through this......



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Baby G
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since 2001-01-28
Posts 39
Australia
3 posted 2001-02-04 03:25 AM


I loved this it was very real and soooooo true..i hate it when feelings aren't mutual..good luck!
Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
4 posted 2001-02-04 08:07 PM


Thanks all for the kind words!  And craziness is an understatement of how I felt while writing this one!  ARGHHHHHHHH!!!!  I hate it when that happens!  
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
5 posted 2001-02-05 10:53 AM


Loved the title! ( I feel NUTS today!!) LOL  The poem was great too.  I also have been there and felt that.  It passes in time, well it did for me!  

Good luck to you,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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