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Dark Poetry #3

watch where your going

nnie
Junior Member

since 2002-05-17

Posts 14

0 posted 2002-06-27 02:08 AM

a dying bird sings its requiem
one final last lament
flying into my winshield
probably wasn't its intent

its 2:00 am.... im bored... what did you expect?

[This message has been edited by nnie (06-27-2002 02:10 AM).]

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

1 posted 2002-06-27 02:48 AM

As you cuss in unexpected cleaning
of the gunk that did remain
The sadness of such thickness now
makes wish it were but rain...

Good poem.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-06-27 10:11 PM

That made me laugh! (dark humor you've got)

I enjoyed that.

Glad yr boredom inspired somethin' cool for us t' enjoy.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

nnie
Junior Member

since 2002-05-17

Posts 14

3 posted 2002-06-28 04:58 PM

bs squirrel? does that stand for [edit]squirrel?

[This message has been edited by Severn (06-28-2002 09:12 PM).]

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