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nnie
Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 14


0 posted 2002-06-26 01:47 AM


i lie to myself
day after day
yet i still try
to make the evil go away

i do what you tell me to
i said what you wanted me to say
act how im suposed to act
but nothing will ever change

you never want to talk to me
unless you have somthing to say
its all abaout you
no one cares what happens to me

i'm alone in the evening
your never around
sitting up here is lonely and depressing
but i wont make it down

one day you love me
and hate me the next
i dont know whats going on
i just need to rest

life is a torture
living is a chore
i wont be around much longer
for you to ignore

im slipping away
im falling asleep
you should be more careful
on the things you chose to keep

my work here is finished
i said what i had to say
for anyone else
i'm not that far away

i loved you so much
i know you could see
i dont understand
why you couldn't help me

© Copyright 2002 nnie - All Rights Reserved
kinson
Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66
somewhere between here and there
1 posted 2002-06-26 10:36 AM


well thats not very happy, but i love you, , cheer up
Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
2 posted 2002-06-26 01:54 PM


Sometime love is ugly. I know. I love the way you have turned it around.

Krishankins

your 100grit love is smoothing my soul

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-06-27 10:08 PM


These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

deep_thought
Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24

4 posted 2002-06-28 06:36 AM


Love(in its many facets) is possibly one of the major influences in everyone's life.

What you have to say here is very powerful. Cant count the number of times I have felt like this.

"There may be a great fire in our soul, but no one ever comes to warm himself at it, and the passers-by see only a little bit of smoke coming through the chimney and pass on their way. Now, you must tend that inward fire, wait patiently for the hour when somebody will come and sit down near it -- to stay there maybe?"

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
5 posted 2002-06-28 02:28 PM


Love can be an evil dirty thing sometimes...I think we all know...

just wait until *the one* comes round...
and you'll be ~swimming~ in mushy poetry...

ask our mushy moderator Mikey...LOL

nice to read you!!!

take care!
D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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