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Evidence |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Evidence dried chocolate drizzled down cup’s interior marshmallow melted and mingled through evidenced of this chill autumn morning rests on bedside table echoing the hour then what of those dried drops of crimson flow turned brown streaking His brow? what of the spread out blotches life’s ending flow? then what of His snowy cloths resting upon stone slabs ruts arced across the sand seal broken, stone standing aside in awe, in reverence, crying out for we do not pray thee, what evidence is clear what evidence is dear what evidence will you bring to your heart and carry away in your spirit, forevermore © September 12, 2000 virginia salter |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ this is SO great........  -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is fantastic poetry. The imagery is sterling. Kathleen |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you both, something tells me you understood this piece. Not everyone does, I think. Of course I did revise from when I first wrote it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this Virginia...I loved the symbolism here and thought you did a great job with it! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very well done, Virginia! |
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