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Perhaps... A glance at reality
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Perhaps... A glance at reality |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Perhaps... a glance at reality In your whispers Of passion embrace Tantalizing cologne Mesmerizing face Visioning tomorrows From yesterday's dreams Perhaps.. a glance at reality Fingertips touching Craved desires our torch Revealing truths Of romance we yearn Two hearts entwine Rhythms of same kind Perhaps... a glance at reality Eyes in a trance Capturing romance In bliss sustaining Pure love proclaiming Two souls undivide Nurtured side by side Perhaps... a glance at reality ~coco~ My thanks to Paula & Spiked for the inspired thoughts... P. Finn (If tomorrow never comes) & Spiked (What If) [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~  I think this is really very well said. Makes me smile  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fingertips touching Craved desires our torch Revealing truths Of romance we yearn Two hearts entwine Rhythms of same kind Perhaps... a glance at reality Eyes in a trance Capturing romance In bliss sustaining Pure love proclaiming Two souls undivide Nurtured side by side Perhaps... a glance at reality ================== this is awesome Coco ...perfect rhyme flow sensual and enchanting very cool write .. and its even cooler when we find our inspiration in fellow poets work well done my friend :D If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Coco...thank you so very much...this is truly beautiful love |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I loved reading this one, thanks,AP |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Coco you have created a beautiful vision here, Thank you Rich |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Coco: love these lovely piece.....great work my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is beautiful......helen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Coco~ very beautiful! love how you have put this together. really awesome write! take care ~amy~ "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Coco!!! This is excellent. . . you do have a way you know??  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Thank you PoetFriends As always your comments bring me many smiles... Hugs2U ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And perhaps a look at the dreams that do come true in reality when there is that match between two that just belongs. Lovely verse my friend. I love it when inspiration is found and then put to use as wonderfully as you do. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Coco - my friend, this is just lovely. Romantic you are, and written very well. BC |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
How romantically beautiful Coco! Soft, yet strongly stated, saying so much in just a few words. Lovely write my friend. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ You took two lovely thoughts of inspiration and wove them in to a lovely coverlet of beautiful thoughts. Quite enjoyable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mark, Bill, JW and Marge, Thank you PoetFriends for your kind replies and I'm very pleased that you have enjoyed... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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