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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
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how many days was I away who am I to know can't see past the mists in my eye head locked forward so I won't fall back shadows behind me to keep from turning around lost trapped in a myriad of shattered dreams binded by the world I chose to serve shunned by those who once were there for me all for a simple choice I made long ago ain't it funny how **** never drops far from the ass? sinking in the world that once was mine so many pressures to do things that people recall find a method and copy paste do it all once more so it's not a waste no one recalls who I am or want to be broken by the words I chose to post by the way I show my heart by how I close my eyes and breathe by a specter of who I am and will be by the one who mattered most to me you |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Poignant, tough writing, desperado. Corinne |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow.........excellent, excellent write  -SEA |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Desperado: I don't really want to hit you - you might need a big hug though. I enjoyed your writing. Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
desperado - I enjoyed reading this writing, and it left me with many thoughts. BC |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I'm with BC. Killer last line. *hugs* "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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