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Darkness Of Night
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Darkness Of Night |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Darkness Of Night In the darkness of night My dreams take a flight Across the moon My signature tune Among the stars Stop off on Mars But fly high But fly on a sigh In the deep of dreams Sleep is not all it seems Heat is there Flames to share Take a chance In loves’ dance But seek heat But seek a beat In the silence of sleep Lovers’ taste to keep Liquid in sips Taste my lips Feel all this Hold that kiss But savour the taste But savour the race Deep within my heart Dreams fall quite apart Bubbles my desire Held in loves fire Touch the flame Play the game But breathe the night But breathe loves flight Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
better, better, better....you're getting better, better, better.... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love this, and the rhythm with which it is written.  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ WOW!!!  This is SUPER FANTASTIC! Love this my friend......you are amazing -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, better enough to take my ease. Better enough to have a few days to think up another challenge.  Because I've not finished yet dear heart Not at all. Take care love Majestic Plotting Marsha almost Machiavellian love, Temptress thank you so very much, just a little more stretching to be done. Take care Mushy Circe love, am I surprising you with my growing exercises, I try you know I do try. Thank you so very much love it is always appreciated, always Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I enjoyed this..the subject grabs me from the beginning (I love dreams!) and the rythym and pacing is excellent. This poem would sound great put to music. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Mushy, now who's the one going into the Dark?? wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marsha~ You are truly a master of rhyme and flow! There was a hint of sadness, of yearning, where you could only find this type of ecstasy in dreams, yet this was also a lovely read! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"In the darkness of night My dreams take a flight Across the moon My signature tune" Excellent....beautiful writing. Poeminister "It is our business to go as we are impelled." ~ D.H. Lawrence |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rascalx, thank you so very muchly, this is one of my exercises in my less is more. I do tend to fill up my lines so this one is very brief for me. Thank you lots. Take care Mushy Sven love, the dark can be very interesting, well, you know it can love Thank you dear heart. Shorter replies today, well shorter than usual love Take care love Mushy Melisa, thank you so very muchly love, but I think you've got the wrong person love, I'm not a master anything, unless it's being me, talkative, never still, and rarely if ever quiet. Take care love Mushy Poeminister, thank you so much, I was trying for that dreamy quality. And I hoped I got it I truly do thank you Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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