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My Day of Beckoning..... #1
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My Day of Beckoning..... #1 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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 I hear "My Day of Beckoning" From Muses to my lair 'Tis long enough my Reckoning Life's Sirens fill the air. Enough Responsibility I've been grown up too long I'm ready for Frivolity To sing that Siren's Song No more of this hibernal game With tufted quilts and snow I hear Adventure call my name With all it shall bestow. A fortnight's nurturant avow, Time now to shed that skin My burdens all are lighter now New Journeys to begin. My Quest in life to have some Fun And write of all I see I'll tell you when I've touched the Sun Thence Siren's Song I'll be. So, heed me well, I have forespake I'll venture to and fro, I know not now which roads I'll take I'll pave them as I go Entrust in this, loved ones and friends, I and my Travelin' Van Will forge new trails by this year's end ~ I'll be a Travelin' Nan. Is Irony in Hearkening? Life's Siren's luring word? I hear "My Day of Beckoning" The Sweetest Song I've heard. I feel a strong case of cabin fever coming on here... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Marvelous ~ I giggled at this ~ 'Entrust in this, loved ones and friends, I and my Travelin' Van Will forge new trails by this year's end ~ I'll be a Travelin' Nan.' LOL ! Gopher-Broke !  LOOK ! It's a REAL smiley again ! Nanner-Nanner-Nanner ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ever seen me with a REALLY big smile? Well, you should see me now! This one is great and you knew I'd love it! You knew it...you knew it!!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Go for it Love it as you can well imagine |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh how I can identify with this right now!!!! I, too, am sick of tufted quilts and snow, and keep looking for a cabin fever cure. If you find one, please share with your sister in the Great Frozen North!! (Loved this one, Nan......  )Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Nan, no cabin fever here!... But I loved it just the same... I'm with Marge, gopher broke! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A fortnight's nurturant avow, Time now to shed that skin My burdens all are lighter now New Journeys to begin ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ NAN, this is an incredible write I so much enjoyed the spirit of enthusiasm behind it... Thank you for this read... coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You put so nicely into words what we all feel at one time or another. Good luck on your travels. Love the graphics. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
OK... I had to take a giggle break at the Travelin' Nan line... love it! *S* Hit the road, gal! (I have an extra bedroom. *S*) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey!! You!! Travelin' Nan!! Swaying palm trees call your name....  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Going west are you? What is really beckoning you, Nan? Do you hear the call of the wild? Will you go west and tame those pesky poets out there?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan my love, if your heading south I'll have a fire burning on the beach. There are some blue birds flying wild down here. *L* PS. The poem is fabulous. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Applause! What a wonderful poem Nan! Upbeat, inspirational ... absolutely, positively just what I needed tonight! Many, many thanks lovely poet! (and I'll invite ya north when the snow melts) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Nancy, What a beautiful writing you have done. Yes, to get up and do it, what a feeling. Took a month out on Vancouver Island to relax, and it about changed my life. Always the best Nancy, especially for a special person like you. BC |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I so appreciate all of your adulations... Marge - Thanks, I shall... even if it brokes me...  Karilea - Um... I had clue - just a little one.. Ruth - I'm smilin' for you... Sunny - I almost feel guilty complaining about cabin fever with you around... hehe... I've got NO snow - I just hate being cold.. Kethry - Thanks - Writing on.. Coco - Thanks for stopping by and enjoying.. inot - Thanks - It only lasts through the winter for me... suthern - Thankya... and don't be surprised when you see me on your doorstep - I'm gonna be a gypsy for awhile this year.. Deer - I hear'em... yep.. I do.. PdV - Wild 'n" Crazy western poets, eh? I'll have to check that out.. Sy - A fire on the beach in Lauderdale? That's a "Must See"... Kit - Thanks - and I'll take you up on that... AFTER the snow goes away... Tell me when the temperature goes above 80, OK?.. BCI - I do hear it's beautiful out there... I'll put it on my list... See ya there.. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya, Nanners! I don't know why I passed this up until now. Delightful work as always, and hey...can you take me with you? LOL! Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes you just have to go for the gusto!! Have a great trip....and don't forget to make a pit stop in Philly!! Delightful poem, Nan!! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
No more of this hibernal game With tufted quilts and snow I hear Adventure call my name With all it shall bestow. A fortnight's nurturant avow, Time now to shed that skin My burdens all are lighter now New Journeys to begin. My Quest in life to have some Fun And write of all I see I'll tell you when I've touched the Sun Thence Siren's Song I'll be. ==================== Nan this is charming... the light hearted spirit is wonderful... love the unique vocab choices ... and the ryhme flow reads like a melody way cool...and look at all the invites ya got enjoyed this read much. When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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