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and kiss is sweet |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i wonder what it sounds like when you breathe... so close to me i can feel your life brush against my cheek i wonder what i'd see if i could see your face-- would you draw me in with just your smile, your eyes telling me of dreams beyond your voice i wonder how it would feel to be surrounded by you nudged gently to slumber by your embrace-- to wake again and find you still about me; you are not a dream... i wonder..how love would be when two find that distance is no more and touch is real and hearts do beat and breath is warm and kiss is sweet... i wonder.. -dgvarner 2-10-01 "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
oh how I know these thoughts, I hope you don't have to wonder for too long. Take care! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
But you don't really have to wonder, do you? Because you feel, even at a distance.  Still, I do identify. Here's to finding out soon!To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Distance bridged is sublime. But the road there is so often filled with obstacles. Beautiful poem, beautiful dreams. Hope they come...and stay true. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, damn where's a lear jet when you need one. distance is a course to most people... and me. I really like this piece. Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great write! wonderful ponderings! I enjoyed the open yearning and warmth in this....good show! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a wonderful gem you penned here.....you described the wondering feelings quite well.....enjoyed and love it Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 FALLEN RAIN *aka*..DGVARNER EAGLEONE..i hope too.. thanks for stopping in eagle!MAR..yeah i know..we got that 'feel' thing goin on dont we..!  thanks for readin JLR..obstacles...yes..too many obstacles...darn bein poor and stuff..  thanks for the wish.. PARKER..and you.. ...tell me how i might travel that course a little quicker....  (get me a lear jet?? ...) thanks for finding me, love..ETHOME..thanks a bunch canadian friend poet always good to hear from you!CHARISMA..so glad you enjoyed.. thanks for reading!considering its been a while since i've posted..and dont get to read a whole lot...you guys are especially generous to find me so quickly... hugs, g "...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee dear heart, as Bubbles I'll tell you how utterly divine this is and how much I really love it. And then later I'll enthuse again as Bev de Bump. Well, you know what I say, if you have another name why not use it. So how many could I get away with do you think! No because if I had too many I'd never remember where I was. Utterly truly totally terrific, and as always I love it Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful and tender thoughts flowing from your pen in this one. There never seems an easy route to take when the distance is one you wish to dispell of quickly is there? If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well it is all that and more...when it is right *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
BUBBLES..thanks so much for all your gushing  MARK..thank you much for such comments..and no..i dont think there is an easy route..just one to be traveled... WYNTER..time will tell what is right.. thanks for reading  , g[This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
i wonder how it would feel to be surrounded by you nudged gently to slumber by your embrace-- to wake again and find you still about me; you are not a dream... ================= very soft and sweetly sensual "wonderings" very cool poem dg Where the touch of the lover ends And the soul of the friend begins There's a need to be separate and a need to be one And a struggle neither wins |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"and kiss is sweet" I have wondered these same thoughts myself...many times...and sometimes I find out...and the kisses are sweet...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A lot of us can only wonder, and hope...... Beautifully written, as you always do! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JM..i thank you much JAMESMICHAEL..i hope i find out too..  SUNNYONE..thanks a bunch  , g |
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