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rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-02-12 02:51 PM

Dream of Linda

dream of Linda
holding hands
light touch, fingers kiss
squeezes the warmth of my palm
looking for her eyes
hold me in their glow
soft sparkle chestnut brown
slight furrow of eyebrows
a demure grin
forming “What?”
but she knows what I’m thinking
as she breaks into a smile

wind caught raven hair
so beautiful toss her head
to catch the breeze
with her delicate face
a moment captured
she closes her eyes
tracing her porcelain skin
with my mind
softly nuzzle her neck
beneath an exquisite jawline
long to kiss her
cheekbones

lost in my stare
forget to look nonchalant
as she opens her eyes
a glance my way
a musical laugh
again says “What?”
her arms surround me
“I love you”
caressing my face
the smell of her skin
slowly parting lips
awaken my kiss

dream of Linda…

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-02-12 03:15 PM

A lovely write filled with wonderful imagery.....very nice piece...I like it!

Nathan

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

2 posted 2001-02-12 03:16 PM

beautiful! AP

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-02-12 05:34 PM

Reminds me of when I'm with my sweetheart...I find myself thinking "Oh God isn't she lovely." James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-02-12 06:31 PM

I really like this one Jeff. . . it's like being there. . . which is how it should be. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2001-02-12 07:40 PM

ah..dreams are what love is made of...

i really enjoyed this little window to your dreams..

great write jeff..

, g

"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

6 posted 2001-02-15 08:51 AM

Nate Dogg,
Agust P,

Thank you for your compliments. When you're describing someone who makes your heart turn somersaults in your chest, the imagery can't help but be beautiful.
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JamesMichael,

You said it perfectly! The best kind of compliment you can give your sweetheart is the one that leaps out of your heart and mouth unbidden and is written all over your face with just a glance.
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Sven,

Thank you. My intention when writing this poem was to give the reader the sense of being "behind my eyes". I'm glad I succeeded. :-)
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g,

Yes, love is made of dreams. I hope one day I can make dreams like this one come true. Thanks for looking "in my window".

- Jeff

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