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Silent Sounds |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Silent Sounds Soulfully she calls out to him, hear me Like a spirit on the wind, nay Circe Come hear the call, come, this the force compels Nature is driven, thus this command swells Hear me, on ghost winds her words to him fly Hear me, his head tilts at sounds by and bye Seek me, his thoughts then beginning to flow Seek me, thoughts racing back to long ago Heart dashing, blood pounding, he pains once more This, the loss of his love, forevermore To hear in his heart, seek her ‘long the shore Knowing he’ll not see her face, evermore Shades of sound rush to his ear, hot tears cast Hear me, seek me, loud silence from his past and he cries, his pain so vast and he cries, the die is cast 01.30.01 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I had to tell you this is utterly superb, absolutely fabulous. You really are writing in the sky love, this is utterly excellant. Always you write beautifully, this is even better than that. And that is not a bias opinion, that is the clear truth. I love this one dear heart I really do Take care love as always Majestic impish Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I do enjoy your writing. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and so the sounds continue. . . excellent Sunshine. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Such desolation, yet such beauty! You caress his sorrow with your words - Wonderful! Lary |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Heart dashing, blood pounding, he pains once more This, the loss of his love, forevermore To hear in his heart, seek her ‘long the shore Knowing he’ll not see her face, evermore Shades of sound rush to his ear, hot tears cast Hear me, seek me, loud silence from his past and he cries, his pain so vast and he cries, the die is cast =================== such torment and ache ... such melancholy beauty ... very cool poetess of grace very cool indeed If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you make me smile...a sky writer, indeed...thank you little one!... Sy...I do enjoy your reading...{~,^} Sven....shhhh.....silent sounds..... Laryalee...thank you for noticing.... JM, thank you for reading....for feeling.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing, Karilea, excellent! Denise |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done Sunshine, another masterpiece. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Sad little write ... so many cries dying to be heard. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Direct hit dear.........right into my secret wishes........the ones I'm not supposed to have..........but do. I love this. Library bound! -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Denise, thank you!... Daniel...that elicits a smile, thank you!... Marge, you are so right... SEA, you can borrow from my library anytime! Thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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