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SEA
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0 posted 2001-01-30 11:49 PM



Did I ever tell you…………………

~ Your smile melts my heart
and to see that smile reach your eyes when you look at me
is the end all………be all of warm fuzzies

~ Your laughter makes my sun rise
to warm me through my day, and holds me over
until I'm in your arms again

~ Your kisses so tender
give my mouth reason…………..purpose
and intense pleasure

~ Your touch sets my skin on fire
be it in a passing caress or one of deep passion
the effect is one in the same

~ Your hand in my hair is a weapon
no man should posses
you still me…………quiet me…………comfort me

~ You are my  rock
with your strength and courage
I am empowered to find, and use my own

~ Your love for me
more than I've ever known
exceeds every hope…….wish…………dream.....I've ever had

~ Your friendship
is the first place I go to everyday
and the sanctuary I return to each night

~ Your heart to mine
is the greatest gift…………..the sweetest joy
the purest and truest love of all my life

…………Did I ever tell you?

             ……………………………let me tell you now


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
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1 posted 2001-01-31 12:09 PM


SEA,
That is just you, the magic with which you speak your mind is a gift from above. I just love your straightforwardness, beautiful and sensational. More please!

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-01-31 12:09 PM


Oh Sea-girlie...I never knew...
how sweet of you to say all these groovy things about me....
what???? not me??? OH hahaha       teehee
OK OK... just being silly...
very sweet write Sea-gator..
that hubby of yours is your coolest muse..
love the format of this....
yeah,...way cool and groovy

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


laryalee
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3 posted 2001-01-31 12:09 PM


SEA - What a beautiful love song! It holds such rippling emotion and the words seem to dance with your feelings....lovely!
Lary
(Thanks for your comments on Memory *g*)

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2001-01-31 12:17 PM


   If he doesn't know, especially after this wonderful, tender writing, he just ain't listening!< !signature-->

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn


[This message has been edited by kcsgrandma (edited 02-01-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-01-31 12:18 PM


SEA~
WARM FUZZIES ???
Warm Fuzzies ???
Did somebody say WaRm FuZzIeS ???

Love it !
Love you !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-01-31 12:20 PM


You’re one great reporter Lois!
One great reporter!

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7 posted 2001-01-31 12:34 PM


Sea~

Beautiful words.....with such heartfelt emotions....




Greeneyes~




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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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8 posted 2001-01-31 07:27 AM


'Your smile melts my heart
and to see that smile reach your eyes when you look at me
is the end all………be all of warm fuzzies'

'you still me…………quiet me…………comfort me'

Fantastic lines!  Beautiful write, SEA!  I love it!

sp  


'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing...

Marsha
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9 posted 2001-01-31 07:41 AM


Circe love, this is Outstanding, absolutely fabulous love as always you knew I'd love this one. Fantastic lines, the whole poem is poetically perfect. Absolutely utterly wonderful
Thank you for this love
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2001-01-31 08:59 AM


Oh SEA ... what a wonderful way to start my day! This was just lovely, so many lines in this struck me as simply superb. I loved your thoughts in this (and I always sign my family e-mails with warm fuzzies and hugs, lol). I really enjoyed this!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

BloomingRose
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11 posted 2001-01-31 09:21 AM


~ Your heart to mine
is the greatest gift…………..the sweetest joy
the purest and truest love of all my life
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


With romantic vision you paint a perfect poem!
Love this!
Deb

SEA
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12 posted 2001-02-01 02:47 AM


DJD~ you are so sweet to me, thank you for that  

Janet~ I just couldn't keep quiet........had to let you know   LOL I never thought of him as my muse, but yes, sometimes he is  

Lary~ that's very nice of you to say, thank you  

KCSG~ I think he knows  

Marge~ Love those warm fuzzies!! Thank you  

Insect~ Jimmy, you take some fine pictures too   LOL thanks  

GE~ thank you so much  

Snowpants~       thank you

Mushy~ thank you for the sweet reply dear friend  

Kit~   thank you for that.......those warm fuzzies are pretty special  

Deb~   thank you very much!  

-SEA

Nate Dogg
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13 posted 2001-02-01 03:05 AM


Another beautiful display of unconditional love Sea..brilliant work!

Nathan

Irish Rose
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14 posted 2001-02-01 02:02 PM


It would be wonderful to feel this way (sigh)

"I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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15 posted 2001-02-01 02:13 PM


oh Sea what an effusion of  warmhearted love is flowing here .....
love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

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16 posted 2001-02-01 02:18 PM


very very beautiful, and yep, sometimes the things we forget to tell our love are the ones they most need to hear, great poem
Paula Finn
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17 posted 2001-02-01 02:43 PM


Sea...you have said this so very well...being able to let that special person know just what they do to you...for you...beautiful darlin

We all have wings...some of us don't know why


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