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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-01-27 05:10 PM

Puddled

I smile slightly at the befuddle
of my current term of muddle
for he casts me in this wondrous spell
and leaves me in my puddle, well….

confusion reigns, my mind replete
of things now said, that sound complete
so I splash about in this, my mind
and find that I'm the puddling kind…

soft is he, tender, and subtle
and thoughts of me lie in his cuddle
and he never thinks of me as trouble
but my, when he causes me to puddle

it could be just the welling of a tear
or my knees that grow weak with cheer
when his voice is that which I hear
and I feel the puddle coming near…

no, in no way does he befuddle
but tenderly he causes a muddle
of feelings and chaos, the love is keen
have you ever seen a puddle gleam?

01.27.01

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

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Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2001-01-27 05:28 PM

Kari love, this is utterly wonderful it really and truly is wonderful. Oh how i love this, because it's absolutely fabulous.
Take care love
Majestic Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2001-01-27 06:19 PM

I surely wish I'd written this one... I make a pretty good puddle myself... at least when the muddler is my favorite befuddler...

Sunshine

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3 posted 2001-01-27 09:55 PM

Marsha...wasn't this too much fun? Thank you for fitting it into your day...

Nan...you DO? WOW! Now I can take the rest of the week off....but I won't! Getting a "Nan Notice" is better than Brownie buttons....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-28 12:25 PM

Karilea~
I like the splishes
and the sploshes
of my favorite puddler's
galoshes !

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

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Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-01-28 12:38 PM

Muddled, befuddled, and puddled! Sheesh, now I'm a mess but got a good chuckle out of it.
Needed it too.

jwesley

jwesley
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Spring, Texas

6 posted 2001-01-28 12:38 PM

Muddled, befuddled, and puddled! Sheesh, now I'm a mess but got a good chuckle out of it.
Needed it too.

jwesley

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-01-28 07:49 AM

Marge...thank you for the smile...

and James, why, by gosh, I guess you were, so thanks twice!

Quiet One
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since 2001-01-01

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Shhhhh

8 posted 2001-01-28 07:58 AM

I love to read poems like this ... as I read I can feel your brush creating a smile on my face

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

9 posted 2001-01-28 03:19 PM

that day - it was raining cats and dogs then - it wasn't a poodle I stepped in but a puddle? ~sigh~ - ok if you say so.
(seriously K - I really loved this )

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