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My Every Breath Belongs To You
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My Every Breath Belongs To You |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~MY EVERY BREATH BELONGS TO YOU~ With every breath... I belong to you, my eyes see nothing...but you, my soul, my spirit, my body is yours, full of desire belonging to only you, a fire burns deep within us, only your gentle touch brings forth the flame, passion ignites when you whisper my name, the essence of you leaves me intoxicated, saturated by the warmth of your eyes, your smile, your lips and by the softness of your fingertips, through your rich brown eyes love glows like new fallen snow, paradise is revealed, a spiritual connection is made in unison, a meeting of two hearts...into one, for a moment I am allowed a glimpse of heaven, you are my once in a lifetime, my beloved soulmate... the other half of my heart, I am beautifully breathless under twilight, I shall cherish you for the rest of my life as my every breath belongs to you timeless and true *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow wee, catch my breath! What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW is right. I was just about to leave but when I saw that I could be treated to one of your poems I thought I would take the time to read AND BOY OH BOY am I glad I did. This was very lovingly spilled on the page and it is so nice to see you back with us. Wonderful my friend. Nice to see you smiling. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
What a wonderful expression of love! This is a great piece of writing. "I am beautifully breathless under twilight"--I love the image this phrase brings to mind. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
And I must agree...wow-wow-wow..."for a moment I am allowed a glimpse of heaven"... I felt like I was in heaven throughout the whole read..Wonderful work...  ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Melissa~ i found myself getting lost in this beautiful piece! thanks for posting this today...i really needed to write it. you have helped cheer my day up more and made me think of my true love. thanks a mil! take care ~amy~ |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I love the feel of this. i hope some day to have a lady feel this way about me. This left me feeling all warm and fuzzy. great read. Richard |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Melissa... This is FABULOUS! Oh to love someone so much...and feel this way! You are truly lucky, and I am lucky to have read this piece. I felt the love pouring from you words. I so much enjoyed this. Into the library it goes. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whew...I had to remind my self to take a breath while reading this ... excellent expressive emotive writing Melis, and how nice to see your name back here... and to see so much anticipation in your words take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a breath of poetry....... "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*....spoken about breathless, I just trying to grab back mine.....while making a thread. love it. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ What a lovely, lovely piece of writing. So expressive from your heart. *Hugs* to you, gal - I enjoyed the beauty in this one lots ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, I'm so happy I took time to look around. I smiled when I seen your name and I am smiling more at this emotion filled poem. It is wonderful. I'm happy to see something new from you, I miss your poems. Hugs to you. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee WOW I dont know what to say. wait I know do you have a single sister. LOL Great writing. Love and Light, Richard |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Superb outpouring of pure emotion and love. Wonderful my friend. You are very lucky to have found a love so deep and true. May it never fade. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
big *sigh* here on this one Melissa. . . you have found what we all seek. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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