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Talk me into the Night..................
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Talk me into the Night.................. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Talk me into the Night I balk at the shadows closing in the memories don't walk when they come rushing in the hurting is chalked up to experience once again and I know to caulk the windows of my soul from the wind ~ * ~ * ~ so talk me into the night, my friend walk with me in soft light, no end of talk throughout the night to lend a shoulder on which I might cry hold me and hug me tonight and then talk a little more my friend then whisper that there shall be an end Willow won't break, she'll continue to bend sing to me a silent song all night and caress away all of the fright then never again let loose of tight just talk me into the night just talk to me, my friend Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
to caulk the windows of my soul from the wind ============== Willow won't break, she'll continue to bend ============== just talk to me, my friend ============== we can always talk but your soul you cannot caulk I will be your friend ~*~ you have strength, you know, willow bends but does not break I talk to my friend ~*~ you shall never balk as hand in hand we shall walk while we talk, my friend ~*~  Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Loved this one Sunshine. This is beautiful. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I balk at the shadows closing in the memories don't walk when they come rushing in the hurting is chalked up to experience once again and I know to caulk the windows of my soul from the wind =============== hold me and hug me tonight and then talk a little more my friend then whisper that there shall be an end Willow won't break, she'll continue to bend ============= very very cool sunshine... very very you ... and thats a good thing ..always Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Exactly how I feel - we need a direct line - beautifully stated |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I wish I'd written this one... You've captured my thoughts... Of course you do that frequently... Nice job, my friend..  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is another of your very best, it is an amazing poem full of you in every way. It has your signature clearly all the way through, like a stick of rock.  Are you okay love,? This is a brilliant poem but it worries me a little, remember where I am if you should need that shoulder love. I can't do much except offer love, tea and sympathy, but you know that. Take care kid Majestic Marsha (Here in my dungeon cell, okay it's upstairs, so that makes it an attic )Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Willow won't break, she'll continue to bend" Beautiful description Karilea! What a tender mood you've set with these words ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes how very perfectly you have put my own thoughts. *sigh* Thank you so very much, dear one. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is lovely.....sometimes nothing is more precious than just to have a good friend to talk to, and who knows how to listen. Thank you, Sunshine...I loved this one!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper, you have a way of pleasing me either in your responses, or in your poems...either way, continue to talk, and I shall continue to listen... Eloise, thank you for reading... JanetMarie, I don't know who else I could be...thank you my little one... Mr. Yeats...I know...and thank you... Nan, the highest compliment indeed...one I shall treasure for always...thank you... Marsha, of course I am OK...stretching literary wings, if you will...and whatever is a stick of rock? Educate me my friend... Thank you Kit...always glad to know you found time for a break... Thank you denise... Many of us share the same thoughts Startime...from me to you... Listening is sometimes the best part of a conversation Sunny1...thank you for reading...and hope you are well... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, don't they have sticks of rock in Kansas love? Well if you really want to know, it's usually peppermint flavour, but you can get it in other flavours. It's round and about a foot long, 12 inches, and it has a name all the way through it. It's normally sold at the seaside, along with kiss me quick hats and candy floss. I'd send you some but it would be vile by the time it got to you. (Actually you'd probably be able to eat it, because when it's fresh it is as hard as rock.) Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Peppermint sticks! O a rose by any other name is Marsha! LOL...love it! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ooooh Karilea ~ Such a gentle piece of your heart, your words just never cease to amaze me. So beautiful. Bonnie |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Another great read from your pen. I loved this one. great job. Love and light, Richard |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, when you write like this, I can feel the gentle soft tone of your voice whispering the words. You make them so real.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BSC...thank you for listening to the read... Max...thank you for being such a new, avid reader...you will make us proud...thank you... 'Deer...what say you? Perhaps someday a radio show, hey, where I can whisper my thoughts for all to hear?...nah...probably don't have the voice for it...but thank you for your beautiful words... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--I understand this feeling that you have expressed so well...You sure know how to write your heart! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
speaking. . . wonderful my friend. . . your heart is showing in this one. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, I read you...then I know how to do it write...er...right...{~,^}...thank you! Sven...listening...{~,^} thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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