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Fool In the Mirror
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Fool In the Mirror |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
I stare into the mirror At a sad and somber clown One that gave love too freely In hopes of love in return Lavish me with affection I've heard so many times Now you’re suffocating me Where's that thin line You are so nice I've been told You have a caring and good heart Now get away from me please I'm no longer falling apart Knights dream of the maidens Fight hard for love to be true Only thing that they forget Maidens are for princes not you What once was a mighty man, So sure he'd conquer the world Is now standing with an empty heart He's been reduced to a Jester's role Being a fool can be entertaining For most to watch and see Being a fool tears me apart But I'll repeat the role Those who don't learn From history's mistakes Are doomed to repeat it As I will for eternity. < !signature--> Beacon of Hope! Your guiding light during life's troubling moments. www.yourbeaconofhope.com [This message has been edited by startin_fresh (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Very nice write! I relate to this poem and enjoyed it much. keep up the good work.. Passion,imagination and intellect running together. Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
** Great choice of words..excellent!!!!!** ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington/joyce :) "I can live by myself, but not within myself." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I this is personal, may I just say m'friend, that it was not you who was the fool... Kind of sad, but I enjoyed the resolve apparent in closing...I enjoyed muchly! |
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