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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2000-12-01 03:10 PM

Zen Garden

In his eyes, the waters,
prisms of shifting light –
clearly, mystical in-sight,
rest for weary gazers.

Mirthful with friend wind,
in dances as ancient as air,
they sweep star-studded sands,
charm the jagged stones.

Beyond, a cambered view,
mountains crest in tiers
belonging to, of earth
lasting as life.

Above, a cloudless sky
a cool dip of invitation,
into his garden
of Zen.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-12-01 04:11 PM

This presented a vision with such imagery, Corinne, you really said it well.

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2000-12-01 04:17 PM

The vision of this was beautiful. Your words weave well to create wonderful images. Thank you so much. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

3 posted 2000-12-04 02:30 AM

Corinne, nice to see you post. Sounds like an interesting garden the way you describe it. It probably a metaphor for something else but i'm a little dense with metaphores...

Park

mutington
Member

since 2000-11-29

Posts 132
New Jersey, USA

4 posted 2000-12-04 02:57 AM

** Skillfully written to produce awesome images..**
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

mutington/joyce

"I can live by myself, but not within myself."

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2000-12-04 08:29 PM

Thank you, Irish, Startime, Park (nice to see ya too) Mutington!

Corinne

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2000-12-04 09:26 PM

Corinne,
You have a very subtle mind. Enjoyed.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2000-12-04 09:50 PM

Corinne,
Hello, Very lovely imagery in this. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-04-2000).]

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