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Grace My Heart
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Grace My Heart |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
A searing advocation that cripples my soul gives light to my failure and the hell I control. My bit part destiny with lasting foolish grace that I hoped would come with me instead it bit once again. So wonderous heart fantastic what left of me to find another journey I must take or simply give in to time. And let my hearts content venom from my own space that whispered thoughtfully and stole my grace. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Michael - this is so melancholic, and the last line ties the whole thing very nicely. You've done well with this...  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Michael~ Superb writings..even though this is a sad and lonsome piece I really enjoyed reading it...thanks for sharing Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
excellent piece, Michael G. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I love how you write!!! Another thought proking piece Michael. An excellent write. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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