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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-08-29 02:41 AM





My Special Someone


You are someone,
that brings light into my day.
More & more,
as the clouds float away.

You are someone,
that stole my heart.
Telling me from the beginning,
you will not tear it apart.

You are someone,
that is always in my mind.
Love from you is something,
I never thought I would find.

You are someone,
that makes my dreams come true.
Teaching me,
I can do anything I want to do.

You are someone,
that always puts a smile on my face.
Proving to me,
my heart is in the right place.

You are someone,
who I believe will always stay.
Always being near,
never wanting to stray.

You are someone,
that I love very much.
Soothing me,
with your soft, gentle touch.



~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-29 11:00 AM


Bravo....bravo! Wonderful piece Erin. I'm guessing this is about your boyfriend. Well it's very nice....hope to see more soon!

Salma

Jeremy Halstead
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A
2 posted 2000-08-29 01:10 PM


wow!!  What a lucky "special" someone.  Kick heiny job of portraying his worth.  sorry I haven't around...I was in Baltimore all weekend with Kristen.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-08-29 01:33 PM


Salma~~~of course this is about my boyfriend!!!

Jeremy~~~Im glad that you are back!!!How was it???

Thanks both of yous for the replies!!!


~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
4 posted 2000-08-29 10:12 PM


Hello, its been awhile but I'm back.  This is a beautiful poem and whoever you wrote it about is truly a lucky soul.

jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-08-30 12:39 PM


Hi Jason!!! Good to hear from you again...At least we know your still alive...LOL Thanks for the reply...I really appreciate it...And the lucky person hes my boyfriend!!!

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
6 posted 2000-08-30 07:06 PM


how great that you could find someone so very dear to your heart Erin! Best of luck to you my dear...and wonderful writing also! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always
starts with a HuG
grows with a kIsS
and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
7 posted 2000-08-30 07:20 PM


Jessica~~~And I am glad I found someone like this...I honestly never thought I would find someone that is the way I wish they would be...Someone just perfect in my opinion...Thanks for the reply!!! I really appreciate it...

~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~


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