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MelissaL Junior Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 22Joshua Tree, CA, US |
I wrote this poem when I was in a depressing phase that I just felt like no-one loved me or even cared...and when kids my age would judge me (we all know how that feels) Just thought you might wanna read it, maybe even relate to some of it. Please tell me what you thing. Thanks! Social Disorder Although I have a family And friends that love me so Something else inundates My self-respect sinks low Emotions slowly disperse Animosity fills within I long to procure beauty Yet I feel like I can't win Peers instigate malice Constant teasing brought upon While I become tentative Of every feature set wrong Lenient attempts don't help No feelings will subside I'm always scared they'll laugh I need a place to hide |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This post has been closed, as it was also posted in the Open 9 Forum. The same poems should not be posted across multiple forums as per the guidelines. If you wish to respond to this poem, please do so in Open 9 at the following link. /pip/Forum33/HTML/000963.html |
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