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Foursome Challenge. The senses of love
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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I would like to personally thank Dennis L white, Lady lost and Monique for agreeing to do this challenge with me. I had a great time working on this poem with such fine poets. Thanks again to everyone involved. Below is the results out of our poetic foursome. Enjoy  ================================ Scent You are a rose, enchanting me summer fragrance Swirling around our embrace, inhaling your presence Your scent like exotic wildflowers, I am lost in your sweet escape I am engulfed by the aura of your sweet aroma Hearing You are a symphonic harmony, melody to my ears. your gentle whisper is angel song and summer breeze Hummingbirds are whizzing by our rich soft matching words Your gentle laugh and contented sighs are such sweet music Taste The taste of your kiss is like angelic wine Ambrosia could not be sweeter than the taste of you my love. Your lick is luscious on my tongue rolled out for your flavor Ecstasy's elixir invades my system, be mine symbiotic love. Touch Your skin is like the silk essence only felt in a lover's touch you quiver to my caress, your flesh weeps sweetest passion. My soul is tantalized by your sweet caress Holding the final fusion for the wedding of our body Sight I am overwhelmed by thy matchless beauty My eyes are mesmerised by your exquisite beauty, lost in its perfection. Weeping in thy divinity an angel born of my burning desire Look into my ugliness and you will purify me perfect by Dennis L White, Lady Lost, Monique and Brian Madden. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Hooray!!!! We did it! It looks awesome!! Good job Brian, Uncle Denny and Monique...our team efforts produced a beautiful poem...thanks again for letting me take part, it was fun!< !signature--> You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
Thank you Brian, Dennis and Lady Lost For your patience with me I feel so inadequate. Brian you caught me by surprise Picking me after i wrote I could not do this But i have to admit It was fun torturing my mind Trying to write my lines monique |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lady Lost thanks for taking part in the challenge, it was great fun and I hope I can work with each of you again as a team or separately sometime in the future. Monique, don't be so hard on yourself. Your wrote amazing lines. Thanks for taking part and in the end agreeing to leave those lines in. I hope i was not too demanding. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
WOW you four! what a team...this is so breathtaking and sensual! hahahah....now im going to go a' searching for a team to see if i can produce something like this! (no, wont do that....but i am jealous..you guys are fabulous) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fantastic Foursome ! I think you four just qualified for the 2000 Olympic Games ! ! This is a wonderful melding of talent ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Great job! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I love this enchanting poem! Put a bunch of great poets together and you get a masterpiece! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Brian, You deserve a lot of credit, putting this together ,working with the likes of us, LOL YEAH TEAM! Dennis :^) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
To everyone thank your for your wonderful replies, generous words and support. and Dennis,"You deserve a lot of credit" not at all, all credit should be divided equally. I am just a quater. It was a pleasure working with each of you guys. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Thanks everyone for your kind responses...and again, TEAM this was so much fun!!....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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